Oh yes, the whole angry fluffy cotton clouds 😂…I hesitated to put that whole passage in this piece because it was technically more of a “presentation” thing (the blasted double spaces literally make me NUTS) but I see mixed metaphors and imagery SO often. I hope to not come off as a know-it-all so I try not to point it out to anyone. We’ve ALL done it. And we get better at not doing it. And we learn. So I guess I hoped that an “advice” on poetry would be helpful to people out there wanting to do better and looking for the info.
I try to always be learning — and always be teaching. I am glad you enjoyed this…hopefully more people will give it a read and enjoy it as well. I am fairly new to Medium.