Oh yes, the whole angry fluffy cotton clouds ๐Ÿ˜‚โ€ฆI hesitated to put that whole passage in this piece because it was technically more of a โ€œpresentationโ€ thing (the blasted double spaces literally make me NUTS) but I see mixed metaphors and imagery SO often. I hope to not come off as a know-it-all so I try not to point it out to anyone. Weโ€™ve ALL done it. And we get better at not doing it. And we learn. So I guess I hoped that an โ€œadviceโ€ on poetry would be helpful to people out there wanting to do better and looking for the info.

I try to always be learning โ€” and always be teaching. I am glad you enjoyed thisโ€ฆhopefully more people will give it a read and enjoy it as well. I am fairly new to Medium.

๐˜ ๐˜ต๐˜ถ๐˜ณ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ธ๐˜ณ๐˜ช๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ฑ๐˜ข๐˜ด๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜ข ๐˜ง๐˜ถ๐˜ญ๐˜ญ-๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ. ๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ณ๐˜ฐ๐˜ข๐˜ฅ ๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ด ๐˜ต๐˜ณ๐˜ข๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ซ๐˜ข๐˜ฎ.

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